Remainder v. The Shadow Catcher
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ROUND TWO
Remainder
v. The Shadow Catcher
Judged by Mark Liberman
Mark Liberman was born and raised in rural eastern Connecticut. He teaches linguistics and other subjects at the University of Pennsylvania, where he also does research on speech and language, and serves as Faculty Master of Ware College House. He blogs at Language Log. Connections to this year’s competitors: “Mark Liberman is humiliated to have to admit that he has never met or corresponded with any of this year’s authors, and in fact has never knowingly even been in the same room as anyone related to any of them.”
Wiggins wins.
Tom McCarthy’s Remainder is an intricately wrought and self-consciously unpleasant story about cerebral trauma as a philosophical system. It’s memorable, in the way that botched surgery and disastrous trips are memorable. Without my responsibility as a judge, I wouldn’t have finished it.
Marianne Wiggins’s The Shadow Catcher is about “disappearing fathers” and the children who love them. The storyline features some of the most implausible plot coincidences since Little Dorrit. But in between the conventional anti-male rhetoric and the Rube Goldberg plot, there are some gripping stories and compelling characters.
So The Shadow Catcher wins this round.
Remainder is full of cardboard characters doing boring things in complicated and repetitive ways, animated by a brain-injured narrator who feels compelled to treat life as if it were physical therapy (“That’s the way I’ve had to do things since the accident: understand them first, then do them.”). He describes months of repetitive visualization and physical practice to re-learn how to raise a carrot to his mouth. After his motor system is more or less repaired, he applies the same technique obsessively to other areas of his life (“No Doing Without Understanding: the accident bequeathed me that forever, an eternal detour.”) Given an £8.5-million legal settlement, he can act out his obsessions by hiring a large staff and buying whole buildings, which he uses as stage sets to enact, over and over again, situations and events that may or may not ever have been real.
In the beginning, the narrator’s obsessive reenactments are eccentric, focusing on things like the shape of a crack on the wall, the smell of liver cooking, and the sound of someone practicing Rachmaninov on the piano. By the end of the book, he’s graduated to murder, which he greets as if it were just another interesting and slightly unpleasant aspect of his therapy. Here he confronts the troublesome carrot:
This carrot, though, was more active than me: the way it bumped and wrinkled, how it crawled with grit. It was cold.
And here he contemplates someone he’s just shot:
The wound was raised, not sunk; parts of his flesh had broken through the skin and risen, like rising dough. The flesh was both firm and soft; it gave to the touch but kept its shape.
There are intimations of ritual and redemption:
I and the other reenactors were like a set of devotees to a religion not yet founded: patient, waiting for our deity to appear, to manifest himself to us, redeem us; and our gestures were all votive ones, acts of anticipation.
You may or may not enjoy learning that it all pays off for him in the end:
Matter, for all my intricate preparations, all my bluffs and sleights of hand, played a blinder. Double-bluffed me. Tripped me up again. I know two things: one, it was a fuck-up; two it was a very happy day.
That’s the day that starts with two men being killed during the reenactment of a bank robbery, and ends with the narrator forcing his pilot at gunpoint to loop back and forth over an outbound flight pattern:
I looked out of the window again. I felt really happy. We passed through a small cloud. The cloud, seen from inside like this, was gritty, like spilled earth or dust flakes in a stairwell. Eventually the sun would set forever—burn out, pop, extinguish—and the universe would run down like a Fisher Price toy whose spring has unwound to its very end. Then there’d be no more music, no more loops. Or maybe, before that, we’d just run out of fuel.
We never learn the narrator’s name. Though perhaps I missed it—McCarthy succeeds in bringing the reader into something like his narrator’s frame of mind, and frankly, I noticed more than once that I had apparently read several pages in a sort of fugue state, without remembering anything.
You won’t be surprised to learn that there are some philosophical pretentions in the background. The author is the Secretary-General of the International Necronautical Society (“…mankind’s sole chance of survival lies in its ability, as yet unsynthesized, to die in new, imaginative ways”). The INS announced in 2003 that
Simon Critchley is formally appointed to the post of Chief Philosopher, having already acted unofficially in this capacity for a number of years by infecting the bloodstream of an otherwise un-necronautical Anglo-American philosophical culture with the viral and necrotic work of continental philosophers such as Blanchot, Heidegger, Levinas, and Derrida …
And the author’s web site, Surplus Matter, offers an interview in which “Tom McCarthy argues that ‘Matter is what makes us alive’ and explains how the narrator ofRemainderstarts off as a disciple of Hegel and ends up on the side of Bataille.”
If you like that sort of thing, Remainder will be just the sort of thing that you like. You can have my copy, and welcome to it.
I’ll keep my copy of Marianne Wiggins’s The Shadow Catcher, to lend to someone with complicated father issues. Because nobody’s father issues are as complicated as hers.[Warning: Plot spoilers ahead.]
One of the disappearing fathers in The Shadow Catcher is Marianne Wiggins’s own—or at least, the story’s narrator is also named Marianne Wiggins, and her father, John Wiggins, disappeared in 1970. More exactly, he hanged himself from a tree in Shenandoah National Park. However, it turns out that the passing motorist who found her father’s body—up to that time an impeccably responsible sleeping-car porter named Curtis Edwards—secretly took her father’s wallet and stole his identity, in order to head out to Las Vegas and carry out a disappearing act of his own, apparently motivated by his secret homosexuality.
In 2000, narrator-Wiggins’s dad shockingly appears to reappear, when a Las Vegas hospital calls her up because she’s listed as the next of kin for the erstwhile John Wiggins, who’s in a post-heart-attack coma.
At that point, narrator-Wiggins has just finished a meeting with some movie studio executives, pitching her novel on Edward Curtis, a photographer known for his iconic images of North American Indians. The studio execs are enthusiastic. “What passion! What personal courage!” Narrator-Wiggins has a more jaded perspective: Curtis posed his pictures and exoticized his subjects; he was funded by the railroad magnates who destroyed the Indians’ environment; and he repeatedly abandoned his family to pursue his obsessions, or just to be unexplainedly elsewhere.
And guess what: Edward Curtis’s longest unexplained absence was to live in Las Vegas, in the same apartment complex catering to male dancers where narrator-Wiggins discovers that Curtis-Edwards-pretending-to-be-John-Wiggins lived four decades later. There she finds a priceless collection of photographic prints and Indian artifacts, which Edward-Curtis-hiding-out-in-Vegas left to his lover Enrico, who in turns left them to Clarita Mendoza, the landlady.
At the movie-studio lunch, her agent asks “I’m curious to know how you fell back in love with him enough to write the novel”. Her answer is to show him a polaroid of Curtis’s grave, in Forest Lawn, where his four children are buried with him, two on either side. “There must have been something wonderful about him, for all four grown-up kids to want to be there”, she says.
Or maybe it wasn’t something so wonderful. Later, in the one of the story-within-a-story chapters about Edward Curtis, she writes:
If Edward, the disappearing father, was to be the GOOD GUY in their sytem of belief, then someone—anyone—had to play the villain, because, surely, there was real unhappiness in their homes, in everything around them, and someone, never Dad, no, never him, someone else had to take the blame.
The person who was doing all the yelling when the bills came in.
The person was too tired to cook dinner after working all day long. That other, unromantic parent asleep at the stove in her flannel slippers. Stressed-out and exhausted.
Mom.
And if the bullet traces of the disappearing fathers are scattered all across the fabric of our nation’s family stories, who’s to blame for all the exit wounds?
Who’s to blame if men keep taking off, lighting out for unknown territories?
Must be the woman’s fault.
Must be something that the woman did or did not do.
But in the end, Wiggins keeps her emotional options open. Along with the terrific embedded story about Clara Phillips and Edward Curtis in the Pacific Northwest of the 1890s, her combination of passion and ambiguity is what I liked most about this novel. It ends at Edward Curtis’ grave in Forest Lawn, where narrator-Wiggins burns some herbs given to her by Lester Owns-His-Shadow, the son of the Navajo man who “scouted sites and translated for Mr. Curtis in ought eight, ought nine”:
I take Lester’s packet and rummage for matches in the earthquake kit I keep in my car, then I go to sit beside his grave to start this ritual.
Pine needles and other debris have gathered on the nameplate set into the earth, littering his name LOVING FATHER, and as I clean the litter with my hands I speak to him, You’re going to like the smell of this, old man, you’re going to be reminded of those places you lit out to.
Advancing:
The Shadow Catcher
Match Commentary
with Kevin Guilfoile and John Warner
KEVIN: So after a first round of upsets, the second round goes pretty much according to form and the (first) Final Four is set with Tree of Smoke, The Brief Wondrous Life of Oscar Wao, Then We Came to the End, and The Shadow Catcher all advancing. I say “pretty much” because there was a lot of support for Tom McCarthy’s Remainder out in the precincts and I could hear a lot of folks rooting for him in today’s match.
This is a good time to review the odds over at Coudal, where they have been taking bets on the ToB and have so far raised enough money to buy almost 5,000 books for underprivileged kids through First Book. Looking at the four remaining contenders, the most money is on The Brief Wondrous Life of Oscar Wao, followed by Then We Came to the End, then Tree of Smoke, with The Shadow Catcher trailing far behind. It’s not too late to place your bet (100 percent of the money will go to First Book and, with 11 matching sponsors, every $10 you wager buys 44 books). If your novel wins, you’ll be eligible to win some terrific prizes.
If your novel has already been eliminated, you can place another bet today. And of course, no book has been knocked out of the tourney for certain. After we whittle the competitors to two, we will play the Zombie Round, where a pair of eliminated books, as selected by TMN readers in a secret ballot before the Tournament, will come back from the dead with a second chance at the title.
Will Bolaño make a comeback? Or maybe one of those lower seeded reader favorites? Between now and Thursday we’re left to wonder which two books those will be.
JOHN: In this way our Tournament mirrors that of our N.C.A.A. basketball inspiration, where early-round upsets are often erased as chalk holds in subsequent match-ups. Only rarely does a George Mason or Remainder sneak into the finals, so it’s not surprising that three of the big guns that have been competing for book awards all year wound up in the semis.
Though let me remind readers that last year Absurdistan by Gary Shteyngart (who is one of our semifinals judges this year) got off the canvas from a first-round defeat to take out Kate Atkinson’s One Good Turn in the Zombie Round and make it to the final match-up with The Road.
As to this pairing, there’s not much left to say about these books, thanks to Mark Liberman’s thorough take on both. Remainder is one of the competitors that I read prior to the Tournament, after seeing a series of book blogger recommendations, and I found this passage:
McCarthy succeeds in bringing the reader into something like his narrator’s frame of mind, and frankly, I noticed more than once that I had apparently read several pages in a sort of fugue state, without remembering anything.
…quite similar to my experience with the book—the big difference being that I thought the unmoored feelingRemaindergenerates was actually kind of cool and different, while Liberman found it, well, not so good. In the end, I wasn’t sure I exactly enjoyed the book, but I quite admired it. I didn’t rush to push the book on others because I wasn’t sure I wanted to visit that particular sensation upon them, but for those looking for something unusual, it’s a great choice.
Let me also give a cheer for the fact that if memory serves, Remainder was published in this country as a paperback original. That was probably a smart move: I was more than willing to take a flier on this book for $12. For $30, I don’t think so.
Lastly, let me abuse our platform and go off-topic to note the passing of the writer Jon Hassler, whose death came with little notice outside of his native Midwest. Mr. Hassler was the author of more than 20 books, the most well-known of which are perhaps The Green Journey and North of Hope. Hassler was sort of the Richard Russo of rural Minnesota, writing wise and often funny books about the real people who live there. He wrote the sorts of books that would have a hard time getting attention these days, since they don’t obviously fit themselves into a particular shiny marketing box, but those of us familiar with his work feel the loss.
Jon Hassler visited my fifth-grade classroom in 1980 to read from one of his young-adult novels, Four Miles to Pinecone, and talk about being a writer. I can honestly say he’s the first person in my life who made it seem like having life as a writer was possible. He spoke about having a compulsion to write and then just following that compulsion year after year. (I also note that he didn’t start writing until he was 37.) Hassler set the example of following that compulsion, even as he became debilitated by the progressive neuromuscular disease that took his life. The good news is that with the help of friends and family, he completed one final novel.
Mr. Commissioner, I’d like to suggest it as an early, sight-unseen, entry for next year’s Tournament of Books.